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Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write using our senses.

Something I think I have done well  is writing my sentences but

next time I think I could improve my show not tell .Here is my story.

Ka kite ano

Ghost Town.

The creaking floor was rocking back and forward as I kept on walking. I looked at the beds and saw crumbled wall bits that have fallen and they were still falling as I was walking. A stinky smell seemed to drift around the room. Red stuff was dripping from the roof and down the wall. I wouldn’t dare to touch it.

By Bailey Rihari