Friday, 15 April 2016
Thursday, 14 April 2016
My Easter Recount with Muscles, Guts and Skin.
Here is my Easter recount after I worked with the teacher to make sure it was good enough for publishing. This is what Mrs B means when she says a story needs muscles, guts and skin. I want you to notice that I used adjectives, adverbs, a simile and onomatopoeia.
![Attractions[edit]](https://lh5.googleusercontent.com/SaWXQra9rfiuHyNqZRFmOsM1AwJVveOkcbdLdDdQmqXPw2dWYuyoaqRuvuIeLt8GdiFz8_dDSojRV9K_ufIlP4vE5RiNCffVOnLptkhsh_EXWvjmNbyo0IVH8wQQy4MOEkTdgQxk)
Easter in Auckland
“Yayy!!!” I said, “It's Easter!!!” At Easter weekend Me,Nan, Mop and Popa Ed went to stay in Auckland at Nana Mat’s house.We had lots of toast for breakfast. It was so crunchy.
After a while, I shared my Easter egg with my cousin Raeden.It was as brown as mud. Then I said, “Nan, can I go and stay with Aunty Shorty, please?” Nan said that I could so I grabbed my bag.
In the car, Aunty Shorty asked,”Do you want to go to West Wave pools?”
“Yes, please!” I replied.
When we got there I ran to the big water slide. I was so ready to pop a bomb. KKKAAABBOOOSHHH!!! The wave I made was as big as a horse.But when I got out I heard a bigger splash behind me. It was Aunty.I felt really happy.
By Bailey
13 April 16
Thursday, 7 April 2016
Easter plan
We are learning to write a recount. We used a recount plan to put down our ideas.
Easter in Auckland
Bailey Rihari
30.3.16
Yayy!!! I Said it's Easter!!!
On the the Easter weekend
Me,Nan Mop,Popa Ed,Nana Mat,and my aunts
Auckland at Nana Mat's house
Ate my eggs
Ate my toast.
It was crunchie.
Played games
It was brown as dirt.
At the end I went for a swim at the West Wave .
I felt sick.
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)