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Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write using our senses.

Something I think I have done well  is writing my sentences but

next time I think I could improve my show not tell .Here is my story.

Ka kite ano

Ghost Town.

The creaking floor was rocking back and forward as I kept on walking. I looked at the beds and saw crumbled wall bits that have fallen and they were still falling as I was walking. A stinky smell seemed to drift around the room. Red stuff was dripping from the roof and down the wall. I wouldn’t dare to touch it.

By Bailey Rihari

The build up for the science fair.

Kia ora

For the last couple of weeks we have been working on our Science Fair projects. My group Me Freedom, Cyprus and Kayne are doing a balloon car. Freedom's car goes 20 meters my car goes 14 meters Kayne car goes 7.5 meters and Cyprus car goes 2 meters. We predict that the more air we blow into the balloon, the larger the balloon will be and the faster the car will go.